Liquid Lake Found On Saturn’s Moon Titan, How About Life?
July 31, 2008
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“Scientists have managed to discover that there is indeed a lake filled with liquid on the Saturn moon Titan.”
“Scientists have confirmed that the lake on the Saturn moon of Titan is indeed filled with liquid.”
Did you need to tell us this twice in the first two paragraphs? The second wasn’t needed at all.
“range from very deep, to only a few feet deep.”
It’s deep or its shallow, no shit. Just say no one knows the depth yet.
These are just a couple examples for why I think your article was terrible. With a name like “Chattahbox” I am not surprised. I won’t be back.