A Grim Record: Man In Shootout Takes 21 Bullets From Harlem Police

August 9, 2010


3 Responses to “A Grim Record: Man In Shootout Takes 21 Bullets From Harlem Police”

  1. Old Man Dotes on August 9th, 2010 12:53 pm

    Proofread. Proofread. Proofread.

    One assumes that it is an “unrelated” conflict.”Unreleased” makes no since in this context.

    And apparently “shootout with local police, so showered him with bullets” should read “shootout with local police, who showered him with bullets.

    I’d like to see Chattahbox taken seriously as a news outlet. Even Faux News proofreads their posts (for grammar and syntax, obviously not for facts).

  2. Old Man Dotes on August 9th, 2010 12:54 pm

    And I even managed to miss “since” where I meant “sense.” I think there’s a rule about that.

  3. olivia on August 9th, 2010 4:19 pm

    Dotes – Unreleased by police…they have not released the details about the conflict. It sounds a little strange to you, but within context I don’t believe it is actually incorrect, as I didn’t mean to say ‘unrelated’. I have no idea what it was related to, and them shooting him was very much related, I should think.

    I will give you the showered, however. It was meant to be ‘who’.

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